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My awesome Trip
Last week I went to the Jakarta. Jakarta was the center of Indonesia. I went there with my big family. We walked around TMII, swimming pool, Museum,Mall and many others. At the mall we met an actor named Deddy Cobuzier.
He was tall, big and his body was six packs. we took a photo with him after that we contineu walked to Park.I was very happy.
My cousin Petra asked me to went a famous bakery shop on Jakarta.He bought me A vanilla cake, the cake was very expensive its fee about Rp125.000,00 but its fee was comparable with it taste. The cake tasted very delicious. Of course who made it was a professional dessert chef from Italy named Matteo Stucchi. It was Unforgettable experience