Contoh story telling,tema holiday.....(cukup 2 bait)

I go to Bali with my family.I very like Bali.We can swim,eat yummy and unique food,take pleasure in Bali is very nice.Next time I'll go to other nice place like Bali

My holiday
Last year, my family and i went to Raja Ampat
There was beautiful scene especially the sea
We stayed at hotel which was very expensive but we were comfortable
I enjoyed and my family told me to swam
My family n i prepared my clothes which was swimsuits
Then we swam, it was so deep
i saw pretty starfish, corals,cute fish etc
I didn't scare of all because that was so interested
I took a picture with all animals in the sea
I was so hungry so, i came back at hotel
My mother brought me fried fish that i wanted
While my father watched tv with my brother
That made me happy and i didn't forget it